You’re the moon
Who pushes
And pulls my tides
I’m the earth
(as you say)
Where you revolve.
Gravity.
Gravity.
Stay close.
Closer.
Let your light
Spread the waters
Shimmer like crystals
Make this body
Of water come alive!
Closer.
Gravity.
Gravity.
Round, bold and heavy
You form
Above me
Lurking from the dark beyond
You form
Full, illuminating
Fall into me
Crash my waters
Splash!
Splash!
Gravity.
But gravity.
Break the serenity
Of my nights
Break
The built places.
Shake my continents
My sea floor.
Closer.
Keep pushing
Pull
Push
Rhythm of the waves
Crashes the shores
The voices of my waters
Rumble beneath
The shimmering surface.
Fall into me
Stronger tides
Higher waves
Louder crashes
You’re the moon
Hold your place.
No,
Closer.
Fall into me.
Gravity.
this is really sexy. wish I had your number,or maybee facebook..and do a renga with you. hehe
Thank you.
I’ve never done a renga before, so why not? Hehe.
facebooook!
game!
game! hehe
Very common themes, but you did a very good job of making it original. Nice!
Originality is what I’m going for.
thank you! 